When everything goes wrong,
It's tough to stay strong.
Stumbling with each step taken,
Cherished dreams forsaken.
They say sunshine follows the rain,
But it isn't enough to take away the pain.
The hurt; the tear,
Caused by someone so dear.
The agony of lonliness,
A feeling of numbness.
16 comments:
Sound like a sad poem...
thanks for sharing!!
Keep up your spirit, and take care
nensa
Hello Nensa... thanks for your visit...
Those lines just came to my mind and quickly put them in my blog... just random thoughts...
wow, that was a great poem. Love that you thought, "oh let me write this in my blog really quickly before I forget!" Brilliant and thank you for sharing!
-E
I love this poem. It speaks to me. Literally. This poem describes parts of my life to perfection. Because i know that it's hard to stay strong..and sometimes the people close to you are the ones that hurt you the most. I hope you aren't feeling as lost as once was. And if they just came to you without them being what you felt instead of THOUGHT....then i have to say that you are geinus. Either way..you should put more of your poems out there.
Hi Elisha... glad to have you back... :)
Hello "my life"...
Thank you for your comment. I usually can't write poems whenever I feel like... something has to just spring up when I'm least expecting it... something like waking up from a long dream... it just came to me... no personal reference as such...
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Thank you Joven
Thats beautiful, keep writing poetry cause you are amazing.
Thank you so much Natalie :) that was very encouraging...
This is a great poem. You are a great Poet. Its touching and goes straight through the heart. Its sad... Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. ~Sophie
So short but so poetic. So much said with so little words! Brava!
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Sometimes hard time, comes to test
How far you can run unrest.
It is not a matter-
the way is too long or short,
It is better to afford
Good time waiting to prize,
stand strong hight and rise...
regards
Faysal
Truely say, I love this poem.
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